Friday, February 16, 2007

Nakaab...

Sookhe hue zakhmo ko dekhoon aaj
khoya kya aur kya chhuta sochun aaj.

Ungaliyon ki chhuan jo thi ungaliyon par kaheen
aankhen khol jee bhar unhen dekhoon aaj.

Chehron me nazar aata hai ek hi chehra
Nakab chehron par rakhoon ya pochoon aaj.

Kaanten hain yahan har ek gul me

Dil me rakhoon ya door inhe fekoon aaj.

Dooriyon me kasak hai zamane ki
thukra doon ya phir us dar par loutun aaj.

6 comments:

mystupendoussalvation said...

jaade!! bahut jabardast likha hai!! amazing one!! shit kiss ladki ko sunane de apni awaaaz main flat ho jayegi he he ;)

Me Thinks.. said...

I am floored, this one is amazing..
absolutely amazing.. I read this one thrice and will read it several times over..
I think this is one of the best...
salaam hamara kabool kariye...;)
keep it up...

pRicky said...

aaj kar aisa kuch
jisse dard ka naam naya karar ho
aaj kar to aisa kuch
ki sookhe zakhmoon mein phir ek bar namee ho
kar aaj aisa kuch
ki dard ho itna intha ho jitne
dard ka kya hai?
tere siwa usse mehsoos karega aur kaun!!!

cosmos try as hard or try as less
there arent limits to human want and ability to acquire...

Cosmos said...

@MS.. Aawaaz ki hi to baat hai kisi ko agar suna di to bhaag khadi hogi. Waise nacheez ki tareef ke liye shukriya.

@MT.. Is anjuman me aapko aana hai baar baar. deewaron dar ko gour se pahchan leejiye.
Aapka istakbaal karne ke liye bandaparwar hamesha taiyaar hai.

@Pricky.. Dard mere siva mehsoos kisi aur ko bhi hota hai bas fark ye hai ki hume aadate bayan ho gayi hai aur unke labon ko khamoshi ne abhi tak tham rakha hai.

pRicky said...

dard khamoshi ki ruh hai
dard tera sirf teri ruh ka hai
par bayan jo hota hai khamoshi se
ruh hi samhaj sakti hai

nothin.. within said...

i repeat!