Thursday, January 11, 2007

Had ho Gayi

Is kadar chahat ka imtahan na leejiye
Kyon ho khafa ye bayan to keejiye.

Kar deejiye maf agar ho khata meri
Yoon chup rahkar saza to na deejiye.

Har khwahish meri tujh se hi shuru hai
poora karoon inhe koi sira to deejiye.

chahat ki aapni misal kya doon tumhe
jaan bhi hai aapki ek bar aazma kar dekhiye.

Had ho gayi hai adaon ki ab to
hume dekh kar muskura to deejiye.

5 comments:

nothin.. within said...

its sounds like a song, well prasoon joshi is comin here. i think you should meet him , he will find one companion. good idea but see if you can add more flow ! good poem neverthless

Me Thinks.. said...

isko kehte hain laajawab..humne tho kuch bakwaas likhi thi..

last line is brilliant..
maine to likhne hi chod diya..

Shailesh said...

@ NW... But we are not going in that prog. and still i have to improve to reach upto that place. About flow i am still not satisfy with this.

@MT.. It is not like that. you have written really well. you should complete that.

mystupendoussalvation said...

ada ke nakhre har kisko uthane padte hai, marte dum tak unhe dekhna chathe hai khush hum, tamana ab udhar bhi hai idhar bhi
u just wrote watever i always wanna write too good!! unka muskrana humein zindagi de jaata hai!!

pRicky said...

kehte hain shayari or dil ki awas meiin koi farak nahin hoota
par apke lafzon ne to churi aur dil ki awaz mein bhi koi antar naa choda...
U r the third hindi poet of my acquaintance and I am fan of all three...
impeccable diction and delivery...