Aankhon me raha kabhi dil main utar kar nahi dekha..
Kashti ke musafir ne kabhi Samandar nahi dekha...
Kashti ke musafir ne kabhi Samandar nahi dekha...
Patthar dil hain wo kahte hain duniya wale..
Wo to Mom hai kisine chhukar nahi dekha...
Wo to Mom hai kisine chhukar nahi dekha...
Kale sheeshon se duniya nazar nahi aati..
Nangi aankhon se bhi hijr me chand nahi dekha...
Nangi aankhon se bhi hijr me chand nahi dekha...
Rone gaane ko hazaron hai duniya me..
Bachche ke honthon ki muskan ko nahi dekha...
Bachche ke honthon ki muskan ko nahi dekha...
Koum, Jat, Dharm, Vatan sab kuchh yad hai hume..
Insaan ka kaam Tumne, Maine aaj tak karke nahi dekha...
Insaan ka kaam Tumne, Maine aaj tak karke nahi dekha...
5 comments:
Patthar dil hu main kahte hain duniya wale..
Main to Mom hu tumne chhukar nahi dekha...
is too good but the theme is not so clear first three paras are talkin about somethin else and last is something very differant it is lookin like u merged two poems together. i m confuse about the exact idea !
Rone gaane ko hazaron hai duniya me..
Bachche ke honthon ki muskan ko nahi dekha
powerfull lines.
keep it up.
same here.. I am confused abt the whole idea...
I liked the line that says kaale sheesho se duniya nazar nahi aati..
very nice...but iam still searching for some link..they seem unconnected...
u weaved poem very nive but I couldnt get u in the last line wat u wanna say & i think if u leave tht line I can get the whole idea of poem but its nice N I love
Wo to Mom hai kisine chhukar nahi dekha...
Kale sheeshon se duniya nazar nahi aati..
Bachche ke honthon ki muskan ko nahi dekha...
very nice these lines touch & make direct impression on heart!!
Bahot khub janaab!
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Har ek sher ko alag alag dekha,
Zamane ne teri gazal ko eksath nahi dekha! ;)
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